Legend of the Benders (50 posts)

  • AvatarOlivia

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    said 9 months, 1 week ago

    *Legend of the Benders (Chapter 1)*


    Air


    Water


    Earth


    Fire

    Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony.

    Then everything changed when the Fire Nation Attacked.

    Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them.

    But when the world needed him most, he vanished.

    Fifty years have passed and the avatar still hasn’t returned.

    And although our bending skills are great, we have a lot to learn before we save anyone.

    But I believe that me and my friends can save the world…

    Fighting crime is what I do. >:)
  • AvatarOlivia

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    said 9 months, 1 week ago

    In the show the avatar was gone for a hundred years, so I started this topic to write about what happened in those hundred years. :)

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    said 9 months, 1 week ago

    Haha I love the variation on that last bit. Sounds pretty cool. I definitely want to see more of this :D

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    said 9 months ago

    @AvatarOlivia: Sounds interesting! Sozin will feel my wrath of bloodbending muhahahaha >:D

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    said 9 months ago

    That sounds cool, add on to it more so i can read it!

  • Airspeed Prime

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    said 9 months ago

    This is chapter 2 of @avatarolivia ‘s story from her other thread.

    I walked outside my small home in a town called Roku (a town in the southern Earth Kingdom).

    The town was named after the avatar a couple months after he died, although for some reason he was never reincarnated.

    I walked down the street – still in my pajamas- to the market to buy some fruits and vegetables. I looked in my pocket and saw I didn’t have as much as I did yesterday. What was I going to do when the money ran out? I was only fourteen years old and I couldn’t seem to find a job no matter where I go. Things were getting worse by the day ever since my parents died. I gave the old woman who worked at the market almost all of the money I had left.
    But it wasn’t only me who was having trouble with money. It seemed like everyone in town was having trouble with money ever since Avatar Roku died.
    I walked back home and set the fruits and vegetables on the table so I could eat them. I always liked eating breakfast before I got ready for school. The food gave me energy to get ready for school in the morning. I then brushed my hair, got dressed,

    and sat down at the small wooden table to eat breakfast. I ate an apple and a couple of strawberries, put some vegetables in a bag to carry to school when I eat lunch, and put the rest of the fruits and vegetables on the small wooden table for when I eat dinner.
    I once again headed outside my small house in Roku and started to walk to school. When I arrived, class had already started, but no one seemed to notice.
    There was nothing in the classroom. There were only small yoga mats spread across the room, and everyone -including the teachers- were standing on them. If you were a waterbender you would stand on a blue mat, if you were an earthbender you would stand on a green mat, and if you were a firebender you would stand on a red mat. I walked to the blue mat in the corner of the room where no one was standing. I peered over to another corner of the room where I saw a box filled with white yoga mats that were covered in dust. I wondered how long it’s been since someone used those. Fifty years?
    Then I focused my attention on the three teachers standing in front of the class room. One teacher showed the students who were beginners how to do simple waterbending moves using the buckets of water that were placed in front of them. The earthbending teacher taught the beginner earthbenders how to do simple moves with small rocks, and the firebending teacher taught the beginner firebenders simple moves using lit candles. Later in the day after the younger kids mastered the simple bending moves, the teachers taught harder moves to the students who were at a more advanced level. When the advanced class started, the beginner students left, and everyone who was taking the advanced class ate lunch in the one room building, and then went outside to begin training.
    I wasn’t paying any attention to the teachers though. I was too busy thinking about what I was going to do when the money ran out. I would come up with the money somehow before next week.

    Later that day, school was over and I headed home. And when I was inside, I looked out the window and gazed out at the sunset one more time before going to bed.

    When I woke up, I looked out the window and saw the sunset was no longer there. There were only clouds, and a bright and beautiful sun.
    I slipped on my shoes and walked outside to get the fruits and vegetables. But I was only outside a second before I ran back inside and slammed the door shut. I peered out the window and saw two fire nation soldiers talking to someone next door. They were in town to collect the money! They weren’t supposed to come until next week. And I still didn’t have enough money to give them.
    The person they were talking to then closed the door and the fire nation soldiers then started walking toward my house.

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  • Ricardo

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    said 9 months ago

    @avatarolivia Interesting concept. Would be nice to read a story of the events during the Hundred Years’ War. :)

    Good end to chapter 2. :D

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    said 8 months, 4 weeks ago

    I got him now! :)

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    said 8 months, 4 weeks ago

    I put a cliffhanger at the end so everyone would want to read my next story. :)

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    said 8 months, 4 weeks ago

    I’m going to post a story every weekend.

  • Ricardo

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    said 8 months, 4 weeks ago

    @avatarolivia said:
    I put a cliffhanger at the end so everyone would want to read my next story. :)

    @avatarolivia Oh indeed, I’m definitely looking forward to the next part. :)

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    said 8 months, 3 weeks ago

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    said 8 months, 3 weeks ago

    *Legend of the Benders (Chapter 3)*

    I’ve heard about people who were arrested for not paying each month. They were sent to a fire nation prison for years. I couldn’t go there. I wouldn’t survive a day.
    They’ll knock on the door any second now. I won’t go. I would pretend that I’m not home, but it’s against the law to not be home on pay day when you’ve hadn’t paid yet.
    I quickly run up and down the stairs, grabbing blankets, food, water and a journal I just found under a pile of clothes.
    I hear a knock on the door. I work faster, putting everything I need in a backpack and look around for any other things I might need. I put medicine made from rare plants left by my father in the front zipper. I hear another knock. This time, louder. They then try to open the door, but it’s locked. Then I quickly put drawings and paintings in the backpack my mother made before she died. I hear a big thump from outside and I realize they are trying to break the door down. I don’t have enough time or space to take anything else with me.
    I peak out the window next to the backdoor and see two more fire nation soldiers making sure no one tries to escape without paying. I’m trapped. There’s nothing else to do, but to tell them I don’t have enough to pay them.
    The fire nation soldiers are still pounding on the door and now burning it down, trying to get in. I decide to hide, but before I can think of where to, the fire nation soldiers standing outside break down my front door.
    I run to the stairs, but before I reach the first step a fire nation soldier pulls me back by my arm. The fire nation soldier holds out his hand expecting me to pay him. I open one of the drawers in the kitchen and pull out the rest of my money which isn’t even close to the amount of money I was supposed to pay them. I give him the money and he counts it making sure I gave him the right amount.
    I stare at the fire nation soldier a couple feet behind him. He’s sitting on a chair in the living room. It only takes me a second to realize where I seen him before. At school. His name is Byron. He’s around my age and stands next to me in the beginner’s class. We don’t talk much except for when I’m having trouble with bending moves and he helps me. He looks bored and is not paying much attention to what’s going on.
    The other fire nation soldier stops counting and looks at me, this time angry. “Where’s the rest?” “Hold on,” I say. I walk to the backdoor taking my backpack with me and knock. The fire nation soldiers that were still standing outside open the door. “I left some money in the shed,” I say. It’s raining outside. I walk to the shed in my backyard where the field was while the four fire nation soldiers walk a few feet behind me so I don’t run away.

    I look back at my house wondering if I would ever see it again. I think about all the things that happened there. I remember working on the farm with my father. I remember horseback riding with my mother in the field of wheat which is now only dull grass.

    When I get to the shed I’m already soaked. I open the door to the shed, look around a few minutes, walk out, and close the shed door. “Actually, I think I left some money over there.” I point to a tree on the other side of the field. They look in the direction I’m pointing. When they turn to look back at me, I’m gone.
    I turn around and see all fire nation soldiers but one chasing me. The fire nation soldier who wasn’t chasing me was Byron. He was looked surprised to see that there would be any action going on, but then he started chasing me also.
    I bend a mass of water from the river near my house and it knocks all four of them over. They recover quickly and get back to their feet. Frustrated, the boy from school shoots fire at me but misses. I run up a hill, and now I’m yards away from them. Still frustrated the boy throws lasso at me he found outside near my backdoor from when my family had a farm. It falls around my leg, and he jerks it back and I fall to the ground hitting my head on a small rock. I felt dizzy and my vision was a little blurry. I bend more water from the river making it sharp enough to cut the rope and I start running again, but the ground is so slippery and I’m so dizzy I fall again.

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    said 8 months, 3 weeks ago

    I didn’t finish part three yet. I’ll finish tomorrow.

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    said 8 months, 3 weeks ago

    Okay, I just edited my mistakes, but I didn’t finish part 3 yet.

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